breannabennett301bcb

Thank you for reading and commenting on EG! Did you like it so far?

ChaseHackerZ

@breannabennett301bcb Oh I am actually going to continue reading so I will get back to you after I finish it. 
            And can I be frank about the first chapter? I think the narration idea is good. It works. But it's a little too much info dump. Which is fine but it's a little confusing at first. It's mostly tell too. (It can be me thing too since I usually don't read meta or dark comedy.) 
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