Disect Stories

This is my first shot at creepy pasta so please criticize and let me know what i did good and what was terrible. Don't hold anything back! Enjoy!!

Happy Halloween!!! Just a short little story for you Stein lovers! One of my friends is a fan of Stein so I made this for her lol xD don't get to crazy. WARNING:some lemon...okay maybe a lot )^o^(

Naminé Rosemeer is 17 when her life starts going downhill. Slowly falling apart bit by bit. Her life was wonderfully amazing and quite perfect. She had a brother, two loving parents, and two best friends. She returns to her old school after being homeschooled for a year. Luke and Angela enter her life. Later on, Shane. She meets lots of new people. One of those people are Noah. He seems sweet, but who is he really? Just your everyday stalker? Or a more crazy, obsessed stalker? Maybe something even more than thet... something out of this world. What will happen when he reveals his true colours? He's not who he says he is. Naminé is tough. She won't let him bring her down, and will fight till the death. But in the end, will she make it out alive?