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Welcome to Crescent Book Club, where you get to share your stories and exchange feedbacks with other members. This book club is for writers who are looking for a more easygoing place to do read-for-reads with valuable comments. Not so much pressure. Minimal requirements. Everyone is welcome, as long as you follow the rules.

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Natalia knows how to read people. She just didn't foresee one thing - that someone would start writing her story for her. The Barcelona from postcards smells of sunshine and the sea. The one Natalia lives in smells of exhaust fumes, raw fish, and fear. By day, she's a psychology student. By night - she works at her father's harbor pub, a place where everyone has something to hide. Everything changes when she gets her hands on something she was never meant to see. Photos. An unknown number. And Mateo - a man who knows far too much about her. In a world of manipulation and lies, Natalia must decide whom to trust... and how much she's willing to sacrifice to survive. Because the truth doesn't always set you free. Sometimes, it's just the beginning of the end.

A book club in which members are placed in teams called guilds, where they then work to give extensive feedback and win the victory!

"You know something! Just-" He scoffed in impatience, curling in on himself slowly, "God, Pomni. I- I just-" Pomni rested her hand on his shoulder, easing him of his greater tension as his legs sat agape. The jester sighed, "I know you've lost some pretty important people here," the jester looked as Jax crossed his arms. "Look, I get that you're trying to forget about this, but that's probably the worst that you can do." Jax scowled at Pomni, "What do you know?" He paused, getting up and walking forwards slightly, "You know nothing about me. You know nothing about this place you just got here." "I know that, but-" Jax looked at the jester, his pupils small only to frighten Pomni. "You don't know Zooble, you don't know Ragatha and what she's done, you don't know Kaufmo, and you didn't-" he swallowed bitterly, pointing at Pomni and getting rather close only to back off, "you didn't know Ribbit." ---- we're so back GAAANG !!!!! this story is mostly about jax coping through ribbit and kaufmo's abstraction and then pomni is there to help !!! her helping kiiinda turns into them dating but that's besides the point... you guys are only here for the chill fellas lore.. obviously. this fanifc has motifs, so PLEEEASE enjoy my masterpiece, my life's work, and understand that this is not canon and i don't own these characters or show ! thank you thank you !!! this updates EVERY WEDNESDAYYYY !!!!!! i also tweak out about their progressing relationship after every chapter ^^ Warnings: Digitalized-gore Mentions of self-harm Mentions and implications of sex Self Sabotage Jax Cover art by me !

DISCLAIMER: These review/critique things are based on first impressions. I will NOT be reading the entirety of your book. My purpose is to urge my clients to learn something new about their story. (Though opinions may vary across participants.) Maybe your review from me will be the catalyst that makes you quit writing for a period of time. Maybe my review is the confidence boost you need in order to take that next step. Maybe my review will help you see your errors and better yourself. Maybe it will do nothing to help you at all and you'll just think of me as a turd after. My goal is not to tell you how to think; I am just a milk dud trying to do something semi-productive as I procrastinate away. Also, in no way am I implying that I am a superior writer to any of my clients, I'm just bored & have attained a decent critical eye on picking out "the bad", I think. We all have written garbage before (you might be writing one right now and have yet to realize it! Who knows-- let me help you find out!), this is just a process that has been done a googolplex amount of times throughout the centuries and the multiverse. This is not unique to only you. It is just a cycle, and you are part of it, which is why I am here to shove you along in one tiny portion of it. If you think that I'm a "rude bitch", all of this seems too intimidating, or maybe even melodramatic--I get it. To a certain extent, I even agree with you! You know yourself better than I do. Remember: no one is forcing you to request and I'll have less reviews to get to. 🤷🏾♂️ {P.S. Super depressed and poor so I'm prone to take breaks. Oops. Edit: On an indefinite hiatus if that isn't obvious. All posted reviews have pretty helpful info in them I like to think tho!} Okay, I'll quit the foreplay and get on with it. I hope you enjoy my services whether you request or not! (Cover done by yours truly)

Honest, Cutthroat Feedback

The Boot Camp Mentors have hosted many workshops over the years, and we have included them all in this book. Consider this another ongoing resource from your friends here at BCM.

Ruby Jackson had just moved schools and wanted to move on with her life, instead her life gets turned upside down from the minute she steps foot in to her new school.

This is basically just some ninjago ship and platonic one-shots because I love ninjago❤️❤️❤️. This is actually in preparation of any narrative tests that I have to do in English class so I would really appreciate it if you give me constructive criticism and feedback on the one-shots. Like REALLY appreciate. I'll accept any ships and any specific requests/au's!!! This is mostly just a one-shot book, but I might make a one-shot a full story or a part 2 if people like it enough. Some stuff I WON'T accept is: 🚫Smut 🚫incest 🚫drugs 🚫self insert oc's or x reader(sorry but you guys are my opps) Anything other then that is mostly fine for me to write about😋

Whole bunch of Povs. read first 'chapter' to suggest.

LJ has learned to never be hopeful. Hope is the most destructive emotion of all of them. LJ knew the only way to achieve what you want is to work for it...that didn't even guarantee success. Success didn't guarantee happiness. Everyday she worked hard to find her slice of happiness, she definitely didn't expect to find it in Division 1 Wide Receiver who's everything she's not. Callum lives his life one football season at a time. After all, he is the number one wide receiver at a top university. He loves his life - all the girls and recognition. This is why he works so hard. His freshman year in college. He led his team to a title. Everyone is expecting him to lead the team there again this year. Callum's whole life has been about football...until he meets LJ. 

Wattpad is the biggest online home for avid readers and writers. Those of us who write and post our work here love it to be read, but what we love even more is good constructive feedback. Here's where this club comes in. Come and join us. Adult Fiction Book Club 2. (The next AF Book Club, following on from the first one which is complete.)

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