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We all know how Romeo and Juliet ends. They both take their lives for love. But what happens when Romeo isn't actually dead and the Apothecary accidentally gave him something to similar to what Juliet had. He waves up lost and confused with no memory of Juliet what so ever. (I had to write a narrative for my ELA class and I would really appreciate if some of you would tell me what you think about it before I turn it in because personally I feel like I starts out good but then it turns to trash sooo)