sabsiesofc
A young woman escapes from the tyrannical island on the water world where she and her family are enslaved, and - via wormhole (where infinity is compressed into a singular space) - lands on Earth in the present day, to her abundant relief... and her abundant regret.
This story, told in two parts (I separated them into two chapters on this platform for ease), is a speculative allegory for real-life past and present-day accounts of forced labor and how they tear apart families. In the 2025 Scholastic Art & Writing Awards, it won a National Gold Medal - the competition's highest possible award - placing it in the top 0.35% of entries out of over 310,000 entries from all over the U.S. and Canada. Additionally, it was published in the Scholastic Art & Writing Awards' Annual Anthology: Writing Selections from the 2025 Scholastic Art & Writing Awards, which only chose 55 pieces of writing to be published in print out of roughly 155,000, placing my story in the top 0.035% of all entered works in the 2025 competition.
Scholastic's word limit is 3,000, and my original story contained exactly that amount. This expanded version is 4,600 words. I added lots of dialogue and extra description that I thought would elevate the story. The narrative, plot, characters, and everything else are exactly the same.
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