@Chiplet haha weeellllll i used to have a sequel up but took it down. i didn't really like it and wasn't sure where to go with it anymore. so i have three options: simply let the story end where it did and move on to other things, start a new sequel, or rewrite the original. in rewriting it it'll be all the same content, just longer and better. like what is posted now was an abridged version. what do you suggest i do?