@GoldenBlackRose1 Ok so it's a really good story. There is one part where it said "Manon says that he could have sung something in Spanish because Lucas' mother comes from Latin America. That's why he can speak Spanish" I think you meant to put Lucas's name instead of Manon or I just misunderstood. If you ever make a second part, it would be nice to explore Lucas and Eli relationship if you do have them end up together. The conversations are good as well and I think you did a good job building the dynamics of each friend/partner relationship. Some parts are moved on to fast so maybe trying to just explain or dive a little deeper into them so it doesn't feel too rushed would be good. But overall, it's a great story.
