DaemonXII

@DaemonXII It just simply fucking sucks man. It’s garbage. Part 2 was for nothing. Zero conclusion, zero themes, zero character arcs, nothing. Super lazy ending. Chainsaw Man’s been feeling off for 2 years but fuck man. I expected more. I hope it’s an April fools joke because this shit fucking stinks. 
            
            Fujimoto managed to make people hate an ending where Power and Nayuta are back. Fucking clown of a writer if this is real. 

@VoidReaderXXII I'll be upfront and say I'm not too sure how to feel about the ending, it's really just got me in a whole state of confusion right now. I can't say I hated it or liked it because I have no idea how to feel about it, it just has me dazed. And I'm not a big fan of the whole 'world reset' and 'it was all a dream'. Essentially everything that happened from the start of part one to the ending of part two was for nothing, every death, every action, every choice, all of it was for nothing. And there was SOOOO many side plots that were left unanswered, like seriously. I wish we could've gotten a bit more on Quanxi's backstory, possibly an origin story. I really was clinging to the hope that Reze would return for some reason and help out, but no. Oh, and maybe the main question I've been asking myself about the world of Chainsaw Man, WHY DO DEVILS EVEN EXIST ON EARTH AND WHAT'S THE STORY BEHIND IT?! I mean seriously, we're still left with SOOO many questions and this is the ending he gives us? What was the point of all of this? Because now Denji finds himself in a new world and even then that world sucks, devils still exist and kill people, he's most likely still suffering from his heart condition and will probably die soon. And don't even get me started on Asa's character, we witnessed and read her entire life, from childhood to where she is now. And Fujimoto basically just swept her aside and made her entire arc and character for nothing. Even after several hours the ending just... I don't know, I really don't know how to feel about it. It was just... I don't know...

@DaemonXII To me, it felt like a sour taste in my mouth; all of Denji and Asa's character development was gone, and now Denji has no idea who she is at all. We also have no idea, like, characters like Quanxi and her girls? Where's Kishibe been this entire time? Is Aki alive? and so on. And the thing that made me question is, why did Pochita off himself? I felt there would be more consequences to this, but it didn't, although it essentially rendered all the laws of the CSM. We also see that Denji still has Pochita's heart. In my opinion, it felt like Tatsuki Fujimoto was burned out from the series and just made the ending to please Power and Nayuta fans, giving an ending that mentions the characters who died, but only three major characters. At the end, I just hope there's a part three to just answer questions that have been missing and give closure for some characters. At the end, it was mid-core, in my opinion.

@Moosh16 Well, Makima won't be that interested in Denji in this story, but Denji will be interested in her, you'll understand more when we get there.

@Moosh16 of course, don't worry I am still planning on following the main story and plot of Chainsaw Man, it'll just be some chapter before we reach that point.

lol might wanna put it in your notes 

@DaemonXII I realize my response is late, but I genuinely like your idea. It is natural to feel nervous, but as a writer, you should trust your instincts. Seeking feedback is valuable, and since this is your own work, you have every right to pursue it. Follow your heart and do not let anyone discourage you.

@Gthr333 Thank you so much for taking the time to reach out and share this with me! It honestly means the world to hear that the story kept you that engaged, the fact that you'd wake up and jump right back in is exactly the kind of reaction every writer dreams about.
            I really appreciate your trust and understanding about where I'm taking things. I want to assure you that Quanxi will absolutely stay canonically lesbian in Heavenly. That's core to who she is, and I have no intention of changing that. Respecting the essence of these characters, especially something as fundamental as Quanxi's identity, is really important to me.
            Thanks again for giving the fic a chance and for being so thoughtful in your message. It genuinely made my day, and I hope you continue to enjoy where the story goes!

@DaemonXII I’m a new reader of yours, just found your fic last week and just sped through it because it was so well written. Like I genuinely fell asleep reading it then once I woke up I’d continue right where I left off. All that to say that I think you have what it takes to believably pull it off. Like you said this is fan fiction, as long as you’re not disrespectful about Quanxi canonically being a lesbian it’s fine with me personally. Though I do hope she stays queer in Heavenly.

@DaemonXII tbh if you cook this much with csm fic, a jjk fic literally can't go wrong. If you're willing to write some games fic or stuff, I'd definitely recommend elden ring cause of the amount of absolutely perfect lore it has. But at the end just make the one you enjoy writing the most ❤️

Jujutsu Kaisen would be so good in your style of writing ✍️ 

@Piplup0716 I did, and I absolutely loved it! The cinematography, the soundtrack, the action scenes and the dialogue, everything about it was amazing! And I can't wait for season 2 of Chainsaw Man!!!

@DaemonXII so my theory for shitara is that either the village will get massacred entirely, and considering the relations he built their with aiko and that granddaughter, he'll get traumatised. Though I really hope not

@RedMousez Interesting, I love seeing you're own version of events and comparing them to my own. It's definitely gonna be PEAK, I already got it all planned out, but I will say this... when Kenji is eventually able to leave Shitara, nothing will ever be the same aftet that...

I’m guessing you’ll traumatize him again before leaving (sources are the replies to my comment btw) so when he gets out maybe he’ll try to be more protective towards someone like Asa maybe? Plus I’m guessing he’ll get mad or sum when yoru gets her body. Or maybe kenji will get more unhinged or sum. I mean he saw his teacher get shot like 50 times.  what I do know is that it’s gonna be PEAK

@DaemonXII dang I see. But I mean you could maybe keep what you have right now, if the change won't have any drastic changes to the story. Kinda like an au maybe? But the story itself is an au, so I guess? I have no idea in story writing btw, do what you think is write. 

@RedMousez Asa was first introduced in the manga like 3 or 4 years ago, it's been so long that I was under the assumption that we would never see Asa's dad, and we had no information on what Asa's mother was like in terms of personality or traits, all we got was Asa's mother going back to save Asa who fell while running from the typhoon devil, a selfless act to save her daughter, so I made up her personality and I made her kind and caring towards Asa, but that new manga chapter painted a whole diffrent picture, she's either bad or good, she cared enough to kill Asa's dad so they can get that insurance money and send Asa to school, but I'm just conflicted on her character. And the other thing, I had an entire future segment about Asa's dad (a spoil or not, idk I won't use it anymore) if Asa's dad hadn't been introduced to the story I would've continued on with my own version, this is what my version would've looked like. "Asa's mother told her that her father was killed by a devil before she was born, but she lied, Asa's mother used to engage in prostitution just to survive, and eventually she meets Asa's father, one thing leads to another and eventually baby Asa is born. Asa would've grown up her entire life believing her father was killed by a devil before she was born, spared from the harsh truth that she was conceived because of money. And eventually years and years later, when Asa was older and she had kids of her own she'd reunite with her father, but it wouldn't be a happy reunion." I had it all planned out, but just like always Fujimoto has to do something crazy...

@DaemonXII but if you need to feel free to take a break. Don't overload yourself alright. ❤️❤️