@Devagowder
Take a sneak peak into the next chapter.... I will try to have it completed by today
I just published "Chapter 13" of my story "The forgotten younger brother". https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/1617102077?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Devagowder
Please update your book Ram's Lakshaman
Hi! I am seeing Ramayanam in a new light via your stories. They are so good. The way you are exploring the brothers bond is refreshing. I am reading The Forgotten younger brother and enjoying it a lot. Thanks for the stories and Happy 2025 to you!
hey are you going to post anytime soon
I have read your book Ram's Lakshman and it was really amazing I just cannot wait for the next update so please update soon
Hey dear! :)
Really love your work✨
I love your ram’s laxman story❤️ :) The way you represent shri ram and laxman ji bond in your stories it’s amazing and beautiful ❤️✨
Keep it up❤️✨
@mandakni123 Alright wow you got most of it, so tell me dear what would you like me to write
Wow I must say I am impressed by myself, I just posted three updates back to back. Thank you all so much for all your support even after all these years. I just noticed today I keep leaving hints connecting two different parts of my story Ram's Lakshman,like what happened in one part is mentioned in the other or a scene or dialogue is indicating a major event in the original story and things like that. So I thought why not have a little fun with it. The first person to find and comment all those hints or most of it, I will write a story for them, you can choose the plot and characters and it can be from Ramayana or Mahabharata. So start commenting.
@mandakni123 ooh I would love this. Always wondered if Bhagwan Ram was upset with his Lakhan and if he was upset with Sita for putting Lakshman through mental trauma by her words after finding out the reason for Lakshman disobeying him. Looking forward to read this.
@Devagowder could you write a story where Ram is angry on Laxman due to Sita haran part so the brothers don't talk talk much and Laxman gets a fever due to overwork or being out in the rain and his condition worsens Ram tends to him and fears (irrationally) he might lose his brother too and Laxman tells the real reason why he left Sita ma during fever talk making him feel guilty ,later the brothers make up
So third update I guess?
I just published "Another reckless move - Part 3" of my story "Ram's laxman". https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/1482055668?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Devagowder
The next chapter is up
I just published "Another reckless move? Part 2" of my story "Ram's laxman". https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/1481932804?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Devagowder
I just updated another chapter, hope you guys like it
https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/163391947