Exotic_Intoxication
My story was taken down... but I've seen worse allowed to stay up. Not sure how it works, but I'm pretty sure I've lost everything that I wrote, beside the lore.
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I may just have to finally restart the chapter and post it within this month.
MasksOfALiar
@Exotic_Intoxication Why? (●'◡'●) I mean-not that I don't do that every chance I get....
MasksOfALiar
I need you reread you book-maybe I won't be such a simp this time, though I also mostly forgot why I was down bad for your boy Third Reich o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
Hope life has treated you well, Guten Tag.
Exotic_Intoxication
@MasksOfALiar I'm always here for helping in any topic with writing! I hope you always find endless help with your writing project!!!!
MasksOfALiar
@Exotic_Intoxication This is beautiful. I haven't considered some of these in that sort of way. Most of them had to mature early, so hearing about the way of grooming had slipped my mind. And the details of trigger events or actions should inflict the said character. I will keep this in mind while completing the characters' profiles. Thank you again. I enjoy straightforward chats about uncomfortable topics. It is hard for me to confine in someone due to being an author trifling on these sorts of subjects. So, I am most grateful to you being direct and helpful, may many blessings come through in your hours. ヾ(•ω•`)o
Exotic_Intoxication
@MasksOfALiar Even with all this, this is more of situation that the child was suddenly attacked, like it was out of no where. If they were groomed and slowly pushed into it, than this would leave them more of an empty shell. Yes, their skin still crawls when they see anyone. Yes, they feel unclean at the body and soul. No, they can't just die because suffering leads to true happiness. If, you want them to be happy at the end of their story.
tinkybutt128
Come bite me for a new chapter in my new book :P
Exotic_Intoxication
And the reason I decided to make sure the state-humans were killed off was because they were human enough to feel how the actual humans felt, but they were allowed to see what was going on behind the scenes by birthright. The state-humans started to defy the Countryhumans, and that simply wasn't allowed. While Countryhumans are pratically demi-gods with their abilities, state-humans had nothing but their voice. Voices that had enough weight to make change. Third Reich is a collector of many things, and rare eyes/pupils are ones he is willing to preserve for. Regardless of what he has to do to get them.
MasksOfALiar
@Exotic_Intoxication oooooh-that's cool! But oh no they died .·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·. I bet you made them all suffer-
Exotic_Intoxication
So, I'm going to rant. You all haven't seen Canada in my story just yet but I would like to say, despite him being calm and the pressured to be perfect son, he isn't defenseless. His blood is maple syrup, meaning if he gets into a bloody fight, his blood would slowly move. Meaning he can fight for much longer than other Countryhumans. He could also use his blood as like a way to get the opponent stuck or to slow down. And than I've noticed that Germany's existence is so tragic because he is obsessed with efficiency, but he himself is unfinished due to being both a late bloomer and having a lack of animal features. While Aldrich didn't break the cycle of abuse, he simply went out of his way to prefect it. Third Reich chooses truth by which one is stage-ready for the gluttonous audience.
Exotic_Intoxication
For those wondering, State-Humans did exist in my story… Let’s just say, they are either rotting corpses or survived the massacre by some form of miracle.
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@MasksOfALiar "Eyes so beautiful that the gods above had the frame them" Remember that too.
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@MasksOfALiar Also, eyes are the windows to the soul. Remember that for this story.
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I'm going to post-pone the first chapter, instead I'll make a poem on each character I have currently.
Exotic_Intoxication
UGHHHHHHHH…. Okay, guys, how do you feel about Hazbin hotel? I have a story in the drafts about a character I made in Heaven of Habin Hotel. I think some of you know what some fans think Alastor’s twin brother would look like, that is who my character is. His name is Wendigo, Heaven’s sorrowful deer.
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@MasksOfALiar He is so cute and sensitive. He would be used to show how corrupt Heaven really is, and how insensitive they are to those whose whole being is made of trauma and unresolved mental issues.
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I think I have some readers in New Zealand… I did y’all’s Countryhumans so dirty.