FirstCreator

FirstCreator

FirstCreator

FirstCreator

FirstCreator

FirstCreator

FirstCreator

Okay, I'm done editing the first chapter and...DAMN. it was a long chapter in the draft but I didn't expect the first edit to come in at...around 8K-plus words.
          
          Yeah...I'm going to split it into two parts. I'll post the first part soon. Let me know how good it's improved or if it's too improved haha.