Audition5

Hi 
          I recently started writing a story and I would really love some honest feedback. Please read it and tell me if it’s good or if there’s anything I should improve — writing style, emotions, pacing, characters, anything at all. Constructive criticism is welcome because I genuinely want to make the story better. Thank you for taking the time to read it ✨

Fizzybae0

@Audition5 you did really great
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