tianajade

Hey there :)
          
          I came across your profile, and I was wondering if you could possibly review my Mystery/Suspense and Romance story? It's called 'The Black Rose Killer'.
          
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/914158-the-black-rose-killer
          
          If you decide to review it, then that would be very much appreciated. Good and bad feedback - either one is fine; I would really like to improve my writing :)
          
          Thank you in advance!