Hubert Prevy

Hello, can you check your Discord?

Because my schedule has been completely packed, I’ve had to delay the release of a few parts. Part #22, which was originally planned for today, has been postponed to next Saturday. Please accept my apologies.

4. Awkward Phrase
          “They were elbow-deep in another day's worth of strategy sessions”
          “Elbow-deep” is usually used for physical immersion, not meetings.
          Better:
          ✅ They were deep into another day's worth of strategy sessions.

3. Punctuation Issue
          This sentence is a fragment:
          ❌ The ball, high in the skies of Coruscant.
          It’s not a complete sentence.
          Better:
          ✅ The ball hung high in the skies of Coruscant.

2. Hyphenation Error
          report-her- is incorrect. That hyphen shouldn’t be there.
          ❌ report-her mind wandered back.
          ✅ report, her mind wandered back.

Hello, Hubert, here are some errors I detected
          1. Incorrect Capitalisation
          “Coruscant” is correct (it’s a proper place name), but
          “the ball” at the start of the paragraph should be capitalised:
          ❌ The ball, high in the skies of Coruscant.
          ✅ The Ball, high in the skies of Coruscant.