InterceptForm
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Hey guys! I’ll be posting one chapter before going on a short hiatus! Thanks for 4k total views!! Love you all
Pimmylove
@InterceptForm Even though the story idea I presented to you may not have materialized yet (despite you saying you've kept it in mind), I did analyze the idea and considered suitable names for her in Gemini, considering both her personality and role. I came up with a name that best suits her, starting with the letter "A", which aligns with the "Alpha" aspect of her leadership. Ultimately, the choice of which name best suits her is up to you. Is all yours. So, thank you for your comment (if you reply), as it clears my mind and makes the idea I mentioned disappear.。◕‿◕。
InterceptForm
Thanks for the suggestion, although i already have most of the story figured out in my outline. If you have discord, you can message me there, thanks! @nefariosity_
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Pimmylove
@InterceptForm I apologize that this fic idea is so rambling in my head, so I'm posting it here in case you might be interested (?). Regarding my previous statement about the likelihood of her becoming a vessel for an elf; what if she were the vessel for the First Wizard King's older sister(and she happens to look very similar to Rio) from the start, without realizing it? Rio senses something unusual about her, but she feels this spirit has no ill intent towards her; instead, it helps her through her subconscious through various battles she faces (something like Rio is aware, but the spirit is controlling her magic, similar to William letting Patolli borrow his body while he slept, but she remains conscious while being controlled). It seems Rio can communicate telepathically with her, but she only realizes it when Patolli uses a magic stone to resurrect elf spirits in human bodies. However, the spirit in Rio's body isn't fully awakened, yet it still helps her through her body until it reaches a point where it can merge with Rio. Even after the elf spirits are released from their human bodies... She remains a vessel for Rio, able to borrow the body of a young woman to speak with Rio's companions... In reality, that spirit still has unfinished duties to complete in order to release her greatest fear. There's more.....
InterceptForm
First of all I appreciate the suggestions but I already figured how the story will go after posting chapter 5, sorry! I think your idea is great but I’m thinking of not dwelling deep into your proposed vessel and 500 years ago. Sorry, I have to reject this idea since I already have an outline of every chapter (this book is actually 2 years old), but I’ll keep this in mind whenever I start another book, thanks!
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Pimmylove
And what if the history of Lumiel and Tetia's older sister was that she was the first monarch House of Grinberryal in the Spade Kingdom (she married into her husband's family), a pioneer in combining magic with astronomy (she studied this specifically), and one of the people who defeated the two royal brothers who had become demons? A dynasty that used stellar magic passed down through generations until the time of Rio and Yuno, all happening five hundred years ago, after the loss of her brother and sister. Moreover, she became the 2nd Wizard King after her deceased brother, ruling both the Clover and Spade kingdoms... Her final act involved fighting the Demon King, using forbidden magic to seal the demon Lucifero, sacrificing her lifespan, and then using reincarnation magic. It's as if she sensed a future even more devastating event. Finally, she possessed her descendant, Crown Princess Rio Grinberryal.
(P.S.The necklace Yuno wears originally belonged to her and has been passed down through generations.)
This is considered an expansion of part of the canon of the manga and anime, adding depth to the story set five hundred years ago.
Incidentally, it's inspired by Yugi and Atem in Yu-Gi-Oh!, and Kurama, who is Naruto's host.
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Pimmylove
@InterceptForm This is just the beginning, and it's already so interesting! (Plus, BC is one of my favorite anime.) Rio Grinberryal, the crown princess of the Spade Kingdom, has been concealing her true identity, as has her younger brother Yuno, the next heir to the throne, to prevent the Zogratis siblings and other ill-wishers from targeting them as royalty. She's the only one who knows her brother's true identity, but chooses not to tell him for his safety. She promises herself that one day she will tell Yuno the truth when he's old enough to understand it through her actions. Add to that her uncertainty about whether they'll ever return homeland after the Zogratis attacks she's experienced(it seems she knows a lot about the Socrates siblings before the incident)... I'm so curious to see what Rio's path will be like, to follow the manga, anime,(light novel)and movies, or maybe even the additions of stories about her and the other characters around her. Anyway, I wish you good luck with your first fic; I hope it goes beautifully. Take your time to create and write; there's no rush. Good luck! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
InterceptForm
@Pimmylove my impression of the spade kingdom was that it was a safe place under Ciel and Loyce’s reign before the invasion; thus rendering the kingdom to have a positive atmosphere! That’s the kind of ideology I want her to have—even while keeping her identity hidden. Thanks for supporting and I’ll take your suggestion anytime—if not for this fanfic I’ll make a new one in the future. Thanks!!
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Pimmylove
@InterceptForm I think she's someone who dislikes the upper class who oppress commoners. She sees that even though the upper class are the same species, commoners should be treated equally, not belittled simply because of their status without considering their true potential. Commoners might even be more capable than the nobility who only use arrogance to cover up their shortcomings. I really admire her for that; even as a commoner, she hasn't forgotten her (hidden) princess-like nature and the responsibility to protect the dignity of commoners (she was well-taught from a young age). She probably wants to speak up, but she doesn't because she's quiet and reserved, not trying to stand out (not really, she knows that her bluntness can hurt others). Instead, she chooses to prove her abilities and make those who look down on her feel inferior (a devious way of getting revenge). Do you agree? And thank you so much for responding to my comment. I might even suggest a story idea for your fanfiction, and I'll let you know.( ╹▽╹ )
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InterceptForm
Well, regarding the shy part, my intention there was to build some sort of mystery regarding her before any chapters dedicated solely to her and William
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InterceptForm
Pleased to say that I will start to work on the story due to summer break! Will be subjected to a remake first. Happy reading!