@LMKMDFan
Hi… i’m just gonna say it but when i first read the first chapter (not the prologue) all i had to say was that it was moving too fast. Like, way too fast.
I haven’t read the whole of Feathered Flames yet (in fact im only done with Chapter 1) but it’s already bugging me that the mc is kind of like a classic Mary Sue.
Your Lego Monkie Kid Feathered Flames story is good you've got to make more chapters soon you're really good at this 100 points from me
@LMKMDFan it's good that you're focusing on wrapping up season 3 and I bet from the ending you're going to do something great another 100 points for me you keep going on this story it's pretty good
I appreciate it! I’ve been debating on how far into Lego Monkie Kid I should take Feathered Flames and I’ll have to decide if I want to go into season 4 and 5. As of now I’m focusing on wrapping up season 3.