LittlePrettyKitty01

I have narrowed down my beast world stories to 3. I will write what they are about and whichever has the most votes by my next update will be the one I publish. These are all my originals, not based off any other stories. 
          	
          	1st book of choice: 
          	A story in which the female lead is born in a family that is isolated from the rest of the beast world. While her family shares the same traits as animals, she takes after her grandmother being a 'human'. After being shunned by the rest of her family, she decides to go on a journey to find her father. But she must be careful of the males, who are willing to do anything to have a female. (This character is 15 and naive of how the world works, having grown up isolated. No memories of a previous life.)
          	
          	2nd book of choice: 
          	A story in which the female lead is abandoned and raised by wolves, later being discovered by beastmen and taken to the beast city. Having been raised by wolves, she is far different to normal females and no one knows how to treat her. (This character is a newborn at the start of the book and will have a pack mentality. She will also be a bit of a rebel and nuisance to the rules and females she comes across. No memories of a previous life.) 
          	
          	3rd book of choice: 
          	A story in which the female lead died and her soul travels to another world and she somehow joins a beast family (born to the family, not possessed). She follows her mother around as her mother travels. After killing a feral, seen as taboo for a female, she is abandoned. She disguises herself as a male and pretends to be the mate of another female who doesn't want any males. (This character starts off as a newborn. She believes in fairness and stands up to females. Starts off naive of the world, but ends up getting stronger. Memories of a previous life.) 

DeeDee7701

@LittlePrettyKitty01 They are all good ideas for stories.  My first choice would be story 3.  Killing a feral shows strength.  A strong female lead is appreciated. 
          	  My second choice would be story 1. It has a lot af directions it could go. 
          	  I see story 2 as her needing to find her humanity. I see a lot of internal dialog and self growth before she would be able to be a good mate.  The story of that growth could be interesting.
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Mazoku

@ LittlePrettyKitty01  In the first story, I don’t like naïve characters. The second one I found interesting, but I don’t like the fact that she doesn’t have memories from her past life, because if she doesn’t remember it, how do we know it’s a reincarnation and not just a new life, you know? However, I think it would be better if she did have her memories. She was raised by wolves, and she doesn’t know the social rules of this new world and doesn’t really care about them. I think that would work better—maybe giving her something more like a pack mentality or behavior.
          	  The third one I also found interesting, but I think it would be difficult for her to be a fighter if she doesn’t have an animal form—they would find out very quickly. Besides, there’s also the whole issue of the pheromones she would release and things like that.
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UwUWriterChan

@LittlePrettyKitty01 number 3, opinion on 1 was being naive can give an angst plot, 2 opinion was mc would be reckless which is annoying, 
          	  
          	  Number 3 is a good plot to have, female that can fight is a new way of fanfic I do hope u do number 3
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LittlePrettyKitty01

I have narrowed down my beast world stories to 3. I will write what they are about and whichever has the most votes by my next update will be the one I publish. These are all my originals, not based off any other stories. 
          
          1st book of choice: 
          A story in which the female lead is born in a family that is isolated from the rest of the beast world. While her family shares the same traits as animals, she takes after her grandmother being a 'human'. After being shunned by the rest of her family, she decides to go on a journey to find her father. But she must be careful of the males, who are willing to do anything to have a female. (This character is 15 and naive of how the world works, having grown up isolated. No memories of a previous life.)
          
          2nd book of choice: 
          A story in which the female lead is abandoned and raised by wolves, later being discovered by beastmen and taken to the beast city. Having been raised by wolves, she is far different to normal females and no one knows how to treat her. (This character is a newborn at the start of the book and will have a pack mentality. She will also be a bit of a rebel and nuisance to the rules and females she comes across. No memories of a previous life.) 
          
          3rd book of choice: 
          A story in which the female lead died and her soul travels to another world and she somehow joins a beast family (born to the family, not possessed). She follows her mother around as her mother travels. After killing a feral, seen as taboo for a female, she is abandoned. She disguises herself as a male and pretends to be the mate of another female who doesn't want any males. (This character starts off as a newborn. She believes in fairness and stands up to females. Starts off naive of the world, but ends up getting stronger. Memories of a previous life.) 

DeeDee7701

@LittlePrettyKitty01 They are all good ideas for stories.  My first choice would be story 3.  Killing a feral shows strength.  A strong female lead is appreciated. 
            My second choice would be story 1. It has a lot af directions it could go. 
            I see story 2 as her needing to find her humanity. I see a lot of internal dialog and self growth before she would be able to be a good mate.  The story of that growth could be interesting.
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Mazoku

@ LittlePrettyKitty01  In the first story, I don’t like naïve characters. The second one I found interesting, but I don’t like the fact that she doesn’t have memories from her past life, because if she doesn’t remember it, how do we know it’s a reincarnation and not just a new life, you know? However, I think it would be better if she did have her memories. She was raised by wolves, and she doesn’t know the social rules of this new world and doesn’t really care about them. I think that would work better—maybe giving her something more like a pack mentality or behavior.
            The third one I also found interesting, but I think it would be difficult for her to be a fighter if she doesn’t have an animal form—they would find out very quickly. Besides, there’s also the whole issue of the pheromones she would release and things like that.
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UwUWriterChan

@LittlePrettyKitty01 number 3, opinion on 1 was being naive can give an angst plot, 2 opinion was mc would be reckless which is annoying, 
            
            Number 3 is a good plot to have, female that can fight is a new way of fanfic I do hope u do number 3
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LittlePrettyKitty01

So, I have 2 things to ask. 
          
          The first is does anyone know if all beastmen can understand cubs or do they have to be from the same species? I haven't read Beauty and the beasts for a long time and don't remember. 
          
          The second is, I have another beast world story I started writing years ago. Should I upload the story to read? I will prioritise my first published book, though I will still try to do weekly updates for the next book, though it might not always happen. Should I focus on one book, or do 2?

LynKuromuno

@ LittlePrettyKitty01  do what you want yours more interesting than canon anyway 
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