Parebear01
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Your avatar story has a really strong plot! Some constructive criticism I would give would be to fix up your grammar and sentence structure. But I think you’re headed in a strong direction! Can’t wait to keep reading it and see how you improve <3
Multifandomqueen007
@Parebear01 the constructive criticism is super appreciated!!! Always looking for ways to improve my writing!!!
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