Parebear01

Your avatar story has a really strong plot! Some constructive criticism I would give would be to fix up your grammar and sentence structure. But I think you’re headed in a strong direction! Can’t wait to keep reading it and see how you improve <3

Multifandomqueen007

@Parebear01 the constructive criticism is super appreciated!!! Always looking for ways to improve my writing!!!
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Parebear01

hello! i am writing an avatar fanfic called Echoes of Pandora. I just uploaded chapter 12. I would love if you could read it. I am also open to read for reads :)
          https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/409493259-echoes-of-pandora-jake-sully

Parebear01

@Multifandomqueen007 sorry for the late reply and yes that what it is! I’m more than happy to read one of your books. Just let me know which one :) 
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Multifandomqueen007

@Parebear01 just to clarify reads for reads is I read your story and you read mine or am I delulu 
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Multifandomqueen007

@Parebear01 so I just like binged it and oh my gosh it was incredible your so talented  
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