Alloydgators
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Hey! Thanks for reading my book! I really appreciate the comments. I do have a question about the ending for you if you don’t mind pming me!
Alloydgators
@Niko-Rico yes I’m going to re-edit and put in a few more *gazes* and stuff between him and her
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Niko-Rico
@Alloydgators personally dont think its too much, he could've been a lil more obvious that he likes the princess but I did get the point he loved her
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Alloydgators
@Niko-Rico but is it too much? Like as a reader did you get the point that he finally realized he loved her? Or do you think that would just be the final punch?
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