Alloydgators

Hey! Thanks for reading my book! I really appreciate the comments. I do have a question about the ending for you if you don’t mind pming me!

Alloydgators

@Niko-Rico yes I’m going to re-edit and put in a few more *gazes* and stuff between him and her
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Niko-Rico

@Alloydgators personally dont think its too much, he could've been a lil more obvious that he likes the princess but I did get the point he loved her
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Alloydgators

@Niko-Rico but is it too much? Like as a reader did you get the point that he finally realized he loved her? Or do you think that would just be the final punch?
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Some_Emo_Guy

Saw your comments on my mha fanfic. Been meaning to unpublish and fix that chapter. Just skip it and keep reading. The story continues normally from there

Niko-Rico

@Some_Emo_Guy nice, youre a really great author man, I just finished it though, cant wait for the next chapter
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Some_Emo_Guy

@Easton-Noah I just fixed up that one chapter and the one after that of the very issues you mentioned. You can see for yourself, if you want. Those were weak links in the story, until now. Glad to have fixed them. 
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Niko-Rico

Yay, love you man, its a awesome story but that chapter killed me 
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