Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: All Out of Gum Part 2.
          	
          	The end of the Pokemon League is here. What will happen when Cyril faces off against his next opponent?
          	
          	I hope you enjoy this exciting battle.

adiaver

I’ve been following this story for quite a long time now, probably around 3 years. But to be honest, ever since the kid trio and the fact that it doesn’t feel like Ash and Serena’s relationship is going anywhere, I’m slowly starting to lose interest. Or rather I’m invested in the world you’ve created, but I don’t see where it’s going.
          Basically my follow up is that I wanted to ask you if you have a proper path set up towards the end of the story? Or how close are we to seeing Ash and Serena’s relationship going to the next level?

Razor_Keyboard

@adiaver Thanks. The reason things felt slower with the kids story arc is because I wanted to do a change of pace from Ash and Serena's romance. It also showed how Ash and Serena are learning how to interact with children, which sets the stage for their future.
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adiaver

Glad to hear. Congrats on getting this far, your dedication towards this story is very inspiring.
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Razor_Keyboard

@adiaver We're about to begin the final arc with the story. Things will be picking up speed very soon.
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Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Pushing Past Pain Part 1.
          
          It's time for the round of thirty-two. Can Gwyn and Cyril overcome their opponents and move on to the next round. Can Gwyn defeat her rival Faye?
          
          Find out in this exciting first part.

X_snivylegend

@ Razor_Keyboard  okay, i will read as soon as posible
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Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Hitting the Wall Part 2.
          
          This chapter continues the battles in the Indigo League. Who will win as Ritchie and Gwyn face their opponents. Also, what will happen when Delphox confronts Lucario about her feelings for him, at the Pokemon reserve.
          
          Find out in this exciting part 2.

Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter. The Ketchum Family: A Blast From the Past.
          
          It's time for the Indigo League, and Ash's students have a tough road ahead of them. What will happen when they face off against tough competition? Will they be able to advance far enough to battle against Paul's students?
          
          Find out in this exciting chapter.

Berasmerahenak

Razor, where's gary oak? I see him appear here only at the first chapter with Goh. 
          
          I think you shud put him in one of the upcoming chapter

Razor_Keyboard

@Berasmerahenak I haven't ever found any AI art which fit what I was looking for. Personally, I prefer the anime look.
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Berasmerahenak

@Razor_Keyboard okay. 
            
            Btw, yesterday I tried to visualize adult ash and serena by AI, the human version  probably sometimes you can attach some picture in your story, it will be wonderful
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Razor_Keyboard

@Berasmerahenak Yes, that's the only chapter he's in right now. I have plans for him in the future.
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