Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Sleepless in Vermilion City.
          	
          	It's time to revisit Goh and Chloe. Chloe has been teaching Goh how to improve his dating game. Now he has a date with an attractive woman who seems to be interested in him. Meanwhile, Chloe is exasperated with her failures with men and has decided to go clubbing. What will happen on their nights out?
          	
          	I hope you enjoy this edgy and emotional chapter.

Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Sleepless in Vermilion City.
          
          It's time to revisit Goh and Chloe. Chloe has been teaching Goh how to improve his dating game. Now he has a date with an attractive woman who seems to be interested in him. Meanwhile, Chloe is exasperated with her failures with men and has decided to go clubbing. What will happen on their nights out?
          
          I hope you enjoy this edgy and emotional chapter.

adiaver

I’ve been following this story for quite a long time now, probably around 3 years. But to be honest, ever since the kid trio and the fact that it doesn’t feel like Ash and Serena’s relationship is going anywhere, I’m slowly starting to lose interest. Or rather I’m invested in the world you’ve created, but I don’t see where it’s going.
          Basically my follow up is that I wanted to ask you if you have a proper path set up towards the end of the story? Or how close are we to seeing Ash and Serena’s relationship going to the next level?

Razor_Keyboard

@adiaver Thanks. The reason things felt slower with the kids story arc is because I wanted to do a change of pace from Ash and Serena's romance. It also showed how Ash and Serena are learning how to interact with children, which sets the stage for their future.
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adiaver

Glad to hear. Congrats on getting this far, your dedication towards this story is very inspiring.
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Razor_Keyboard

@adiaver We're about to begin the final arc with the story. Things will be picking up speed very soon.
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Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Pushing Past Pain Part 1.
          
          It's time for the round of thirty-two. Can Gwyn and Cyril overcome their opponents and move on to the next round. Can Gwyn defeat her rival Faye?
          
          Find out in this exciting first part.

X_snivylegend

@ Razor_Keyboard  okay, i will read as soon as posible
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Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter for my work, The Ketchum Family: Hitting the Wall Part 2.
          
          This chapter continues the battles in the Indigo League. Who will win as Ritchie and Gwyn face their opponents. Also, what will happen when Delphox confronts Lucario about her feelings for him, at the Pokemon reserve.
          
          Find out in this exciting part 2.

Razor_Keyboard

I have posted a new chapter. The Ketchum Family: A Blast From the Past.
          
          It's time for the Indigo League, and Ash's students have a tough road ahead of them. What will happen when they face off against tough competition? Will they be able to advance far enough to battle against Paul's students?
          
          Find out in this exciting chapter.