Beejay Odufuwa

Hi I'm new here. Could you please take a look at any of my poems? I really want to improve my writing and keep going. Thanks a lot.^^
          
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/12888895-the-sands-of-summer
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/13016386-shades-of-autumn
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/13034943-tales-of-winter
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/13059164-the-scent-of-spring

hey can you please have a look at my poetry and maybe give constructive critique. i'm new :)

Hi! Would you mind to give some comments and critic my poem? http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/30186518-melancholy-life-of-the-author-li-f-e I really want to improve! It includes to my new book of poem but I still think there is something missing. I guess because I'm kinda new here. 
          
          :) <3

Hi! I would like you to check out my poetry collection. I'm new, I want it to be critiqued so that I know how to improve! :) http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/11884913-a-rainbow-collection

I got some nice comments on my poem: http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/30644655-homolovable. But I want it to be read scrutinisingly and critiqued so I can work on my penning. I'd love to be guided. :)

Hey man, I want you to critique my poems if you don't mind. Thanks!
          
          http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/user/AkoSiBatibot

would you mind reading and critiquing my poem http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/26626915-alibi-of-love? It would mean so much! I honestly don't even know if it makes sense so i could use some guidance! SO if you would be honest that would be great!

Can you critique my poem called "The Normal Misunderstood." Thanks! :)

Hello. If possible, could you you critique my poetry collection, 'Poems from the Abyss'?

I would very much like if you critique my poem. "The Tree Of Words." - http://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/story/10561174 . Thank you so much.