frayrays

Hi, I've added a new poem 'Fragments of You' to the self reflections collection. Have  look at it if you have time.
          	
          	When I posted this earlier, I over edited it, it lost its meaning.
          	
          	https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/1613802233-self-reflection-fragments-of-you

novelistASH

@frayrays Hmm. I guess if that's your problem you could try to have collections with broader subjects. Conversely this could be your thing. Some creators put a new book for each poem after all and engagement does seem to drop off after around 12 entries.
          	  
          	  "where we once lived" is definitely punchier but their something impersonal or vaguely sinister about "the spaces" that I really like.
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frayrays

@novelistASH I could start a new collection but then the old one will only have 2 and I'm trying to break that habit of having all my poem sectioned and create one collection.  I'm deciding between 'the spaces we once lived' or slightly difference 'where we once lived'
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novelistASH

@frayrays You could start a new collection to represent that shift. Plus new covers can be fun. Do you have a working title?
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StardustHex

Hey there! thank you so much for the follow and for checking out my profile ☺️ gosh, I don't have a certain favorite out of the stories I've written so maybe I'll just let you choose based on your preference? ♥️ if you're into teen romance (brother's best friend trope) but with depth—I've got The Sweetest Lie for you. For age-gap romance/erotica, you could give The Au Pair a read. For dark romance x mafia x biker trope, there's Mockingbird. For vampire romance (300 yr old vampire meets a Christian missionary), try Sins of the Flesh. And for dark romantasy, there's my Watty-winning book The Blood Witch ☺️ there ya go! Thanks again! And I'm just a bit busy with real life right now but I promise to check out your works too! ♥️✨

frayrays

@StardustHex I probably would read the blood witch, not because it won the watty but because its more my genre of reading  but so are vampires. So might read both. I understand about real life. This is the first year I have time to read longer pieces and be on here longer. I'm trying to write books now. I love poetry but I'm trying to do both, but I'll see you when your life has more time
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quin_james

Thanks for the votes!

frayrays

@quin_james good luck though on the ONC
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quin_james

get your story in the wattys!! i’m planning to extend Ms. Miss to get it in the wattys as well~
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frayrays

@quin_james your welcome.  Am actually looking forward to reading your entry. Makes me gutted that I planned novel length instead, just should have posted with you all. Will do next year.
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frayrays

Hi, I've added a new poem 'Fragments of You' to the self reflections collection. Have  look at it if you have time.
          
          When I posted this earlier, I over edited it, it lost its meaning.
          
          https://yamur.dijitalkalp.com/1613802233-self-reflection-fragments-of-you

novelistASH

@frayrays Hmm. I guess if that's your problem you could try to have collections with broader subjects. Conversely this could be your thing. Some creators put a new book for each poem after all and engagement does seem to drop off after around 12 entries.
            
            "where we once lived" is definitely punchier but their something impersonal or vaguely sinister about "the spaces" that I really like.
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frayrays

@novelistASH I could start a new collection but then the old one will only have 2 and I'm trying to break that habit of having all my poem sectioned and create one collection.  I'm deciding between 'the spaces we once lived' or slightly difference 'where we once lived'
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novelistASH

@frayrays You could start a new collection to represent that shift. Plus new covers can be fun. Do you have a working title?
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Polllardii

Thanks for following me, I also live in the UK, Bristol where we also get rain every two seconds!  Ha, ha.  This summer has been a wash out!
          I will read some of your work when I have a moment.

frayrays

@Polllardii it's typical British weather. You've been on my reading list for awhile. I wish there were more hours!
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