pixie_25

Hey guys, hope you’re enjoying this book so far. I just wanted to say that I have a slight fear that the beginning may be a bit boring because it is just setting the ground for the rest of the story and rarely any characters or bands are introduced since they weren’t that active in the late 80’s. But fear not the rest of the book will be worth your time. If you have any tips or ideas please share them with me. Thank you all for your support!!!!

pixie_25

Thank you so much for your feedback <333
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tommyleeswifey

@pixie_25 girl, literally don't worry about it. I really like the chapters you have out so far and because I read this story before I know it's calm in the beginning then shits gonna get real, soon. But the only thing I could tell you is maybe focus more on the narration than dialogue. Cause your dialogue is crazy good but we still barely know anything about the characters. But i'm starting to think we will soon.
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pixie_25

Hey guys, hope you’re enjoying this book so far. I just wanted to say that I have a slight fear that the beginning may be a bit boring because it is just setting the ground for the rest of the story and rarely any characters or bands are introduced since they weren’t that active in the late 80’s. But fear not the rest of the book will be worth your time. If you have any tips or ideas please share them with me. Thank you all for your support!!!!

pixie_25

Thank you so much for your feedback <333
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tommyleeswifey

@pixie_25 girl, literally don't worry about it. I really like the chapters you have out so far and because I read this story before I know it's calm in the beginning then shits gonna get real, soon. But the only thing I could tell you is maybe focus more on the narration than dialogue. Cause your dialogue is crazy good but we still barely know anything about the characters. But i'm starting to think we will soon.
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pixie_25

Hello everyone, hope your enjoying the story so far. The first three chapters are intros for each character. The story will start to speed up after those three chapters. If anyone has any criticisms and ideas, please feel free to share them with me. I’m very open to learn and grow and make this story better. Hope you enjoy the book <3

pixie_25

So, I need help!!! I’ve been rethinking everything for the love interest. Should it be Kurt Cobain or Chris Cornell, ORRR, should it be Kurt first then Chris, or Chris first then Kurt??? Please help me!!!!

meemawreads07

BRU IM TO LATE LOVE THE STORYY !! but i definitely say main love interest should be kurt
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pixie_25

okay, thank you all for the replies, I’ll get too writing <33
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tommyleeswifey

@pixie_25 kurt as main love interest!!! I think he'll get too attached to her but she doesn't want to get hurt, so she'll turn to chris, but yeah, kurt for the win
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pixie_25

I unpublished the story because I realized a lot of things didn’t add up, and also I wanted to change a couple things, I’ll bring it back soon.

sinfuldelusion

I’m so late I never saw this
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pixie_25

<33
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blopbelpblow

I was about to freak out take your time
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pixie_25

And Claudia Schiffer again isn’t that accurate, Calypso’s face is smaller, and her eyes are bigger, like almost between sleepy and almond shaped, and their brown not blue. That’s it, new chapter coming soon!!!