OMG ILYSM your actually the sweetest writer EVER, so 1) On the tin was SO GOOD THETE is NO fics of Hoosier and idk why bc he is a FINE man(no fics of the pacific overall), there was something in my eye at the end (no there wasn’t, I was crying) because the alternate ending had my HEART but the original ending broke it. And 2) I MIGHT have somehow loved this one more, it was so so good I can’t even explain it and had me SOBBING my eyes out at the end. Your writing flows so naturally and you incorporate poetry and REFRENCES into your writing I didn’t even realised I memorised. PLEASE keep writing and PLEASE ALWAYS SMILE you deserve it so much. (Also if you know any Snafu fics or pacific overall gimme a shout ) that’s all queen, BYE ILY