xMrsSullyx
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I NEED ABSOLUTELY PEAK FANFIC RECOMMENDATIONS FOR A LONG FLIGHT.
I MEAN PEAK. (I cannot read bad ones anymore)
And if anyone says His Star or Chosen—
Yeah lol that’s facts
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I just wanted to let you know the chapters of his star are not in the right order
xMrsSullyx
Wrong order how? I realise there is a problem with the chapter numbering but id never taken the time to fix it, do you mean that or like chapters are actually in the wrong order because I don’t think they are
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harps_obx
ok ok ok so i was thinkinggg…
so i know you said that fayli and neteyam had an affair
and i know you said you want more of loak and ahari
so hear me out…..
a book about fayli and neteyam as well as those 2 as teens and it can be like “ the one who got away” typa vibe
allll ideas tho you don’t at all have to this or even thinks it’s good im just putting my thoughts out there because i have a lot of them
harps_obx
ofcccc i’m so glad you like it but yes i was thinking like a prequel maybe before/during the war that doesn’t necessarily focus on just loak and ahari but just like their whole ‘friend group’ if that makes sense
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xMrsSullyx
Like a prologue type thing? With more details into Lo’ak and Aha’ri as teenagers (I have so many ideas for this) while including insight into Neteyam and Faylì having a fling together? COUNT ME IN!! I’ll need to develop it a little further but I’ll definitely do something like this!! I love when people tell me what they want to read and thank you for the idea
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xMrsSullyx
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I’m not crying over this…totally not crying…totally…
HAPPY TEARS though…well, some sad.
God I’m going to miss these two. Expect so fucking many bonus chapters
xMrsSullyx
THE FINALE.
THIS IS IT, THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS OF HIS STAR! (Of the main story)
BOTH WILL BE RELEASED MONDAY 22ND JUNE.
I’m so excited to share the ending to this (somewhat tragic) story, and I hope you have enjoyed the rollercoaster I’ve sent you on.
Chosen chapters will continue as normal until then, see you soon for the final strike.
Oel Ngati Kameie ma eylan.
xMrsSullyx
@harps_obx thank you so much for your support throughout this book, it means the world to me and I can’t wait for more chapters of your fic!! Oel ngati kameie
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harps_obx
omggg the end has come i loved this fic sooo much probably the best avatar book ive read. can’t wait for the add on storys and your other books!
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xMrsSullyx
No stop it Kall I’m going to cry. Thank you so much!!! I’ve started planning for my debut novel and I really believe I can do it. This isn’t the end of Aha’ri and Lo’ak and it certainly isn’t the end of me. The minute I finish my novel I’ll give you the name of it x
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xMrsSullyx
Sorry about latest chapter of His Star…
It wasn’t planned until like a couple weeks ago.
Sincerely sorry, but Aha’ri needed to be thoroughly traumatised for the next part to work…so yah!
xMrsSullyx
Don’t panic guys both books will be back in a couple of days
xMrsSullyx
How would we guys feel about me expanding Chosen to another book? I could fit the plot into one but I feel like a second would be better.
His Star only has 5 main chapters left—but that is definitely not the end of Lo’ak and Aha’ri. Bonus and Slice of Life chapters are already in the making, because the plot DOES NOT end when the main story arc does.
Also, just pitching ideas here while I’m at it.
For another Lo’ak book somewhere down the line (when chosen is finished cause I ain’t putting myself through two books at once again) I’ve been thinking,
1. Outcast OC who has no clan/her clan was destroyed. She ends up in reef injured after a run in with the Sky people. Once she’s healed, she would usually leave, like all the other clans—but something, or rather someone, seems to be holding her back.
OR.
2. A book that I’ve already partially written, about two princesses (future Olo’eykte and tsahìk) from a destroyed clan who fall in love with two brothers. (or could just be a standalone with either Lo’ak or Neteyam.)
Thank you so much for your support! I’m so grateful to those who have stuck by through the entirety of His Star, and I repeat the end is never truly the end. If I can come up with a plot, or find plot holes that need solved…
Maybe His Star will have a sequel?
xMrsSullyx
@kiki21112025 love you queen, now get back to writing as I am demanding another chapter of Crimson water asap
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harps_obx
Hey i was wondering how you make your covers? i wanted to make one for a book im working on
xMrsSullyx
Hii! I use an app called ‘Book cover maker’, it’s the one with the red logo! Can’t wait to read your book!
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xMrsSullyx
I’ve reached flow state with chosen
His Star however…I’m not so sure.
xMrsSullyx
I’m such an inbetween girly like I cannot figure out which one. I just wish I could go back and edit his star (which I will be doing once it’s complete) to fix the stupid amount of plot holes I’ve dug myself onto
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